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December 1, 2010

More Thoughts to Ponder

In a recent post I posed a question raised by my reading of Milton's Paradise Lost.  In essence, the question was: why would Adam choose Eve over God?  (For a full disclosure of the dilemma, read the post).

Here are further thoughts which lead towards a potential solution to this problem:



In Book 9 of Paradise Lost we discover Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden on the morning of the renowned fall.  Eve asks leave of Adam and a conversation ensues.  In this conversation we hear Adam at variance with the notion that Eve be separated from him.  The reasons he presents are clear: Eve is not strong enough to withstand the foe without his assistance and security.  Eve is indignant at the suggestion that she is, while alone, unable to resist temptation.  Thus, Adam’s reasoning simply serves to fortify Eve’s resolve. 
                
The motives for Adam’s fear of separation seem to stem from his desire that he not be left alone.  It is significant that Adam never expresses his own susceptibility to temptation in his discussion with Eve.  If Eve is liable to temptation while she is alone, why is Adam not similarly vulnerable?  I believe this idea of Eve’s susceptibility being greater than Adam’s vulnerability is supported textually by Milton.  As Milton depicts Satan’s monologue of viewing the garden and the first man and wife within the garden, Satan is excited not by seeing Adam alone, but in seeing Eve by herself. 
               
One way to view this move is simple and straight forward: As Satan wanders within the garden, he first sees Eve.  In seeing Eve, he sees a vulnerable human (regardless of name, personality, or gender) and makes his move.  Eve is susceptible enough that Satan does not need to look for any other options of vulnerability (namely, Adam).  He has one door open and has no need to seek additional open doors.  Another way to view this move is to see a greater vulnerability in Eve than that which exists within the character of Adam.  This would be supported by Adam’s lack of mentioning his own frailty. 

DIFFERING VIEWS OF SOLITUDE
                 
Background to Book 9 reveals to us two very different experiences of solitude.  On the one hand, we have Adam experiencing solitude prior to the creation of Eve.  His solitude leaves him feeling highly dissatisfied.  After naming the beasts, he expresses his disappointment to God: “In solitude what happiness, who can enjoy alone?” (Milton, Book 8, 364-365).  Despite the happiness available to him, Adam clearly states that he does not believe that he can enjoy Paradise without a companion with which to enjoy Paradise with.  As Mary Beth Long points out, “Adam’s first use of the term ‘solitude’ is to indicate a lack” (Long, 3).  In this, it seems that Adam notices a lack and determines that this lack is caused by his being alone.  God responds to Adam’s complaint by demonstrating that happiness is available to Adam; Adam is simply refusing experience this pleasure until he has a companion (Milton, Book 8, 399-402).
                 
Although God seems to find a fault in Adam’s stubbornness in these lines, he still recognizes Adam’s request for a mate as something that is good[1].  As a response, God creates Eve.  Since Eve’s creation is a solution to Adam’s solitude, Eve’s purpose for existence (in Adam’s mind) becomes the relief of Adam’s forced loneliness (Long, 4).  Therefore, when Eve desires to leave, Adam is once again experiencing an involuntary solitude.  So, in Adam’s mind Eve is forsaking her God-given purpose for existence.
                 
Adam’s past experiences of solitude were negative.  Adam does not have any positive connotations to solitude from his own experiences.  With this perspective, it can be understood how Adam is unable to imagine that Eve would willingly desire solitude.  In Adam’s understanding the idea of contentment and solitude are as oil and water. 
                 
In contrast, Eve’s experience of solitude was cut short.  She hears a voice call to her, and in responding her solitude comes to an end.  In this, we can infer that Eve did not have a chance to experience enough solitude to see the loneliness of it.  Perhaps she would be on the same page as Adam if she had simply had more time in solitude prior to her introduction to Adam.  Instead, she does not sense a need for a companion prior to her receiving companionship. 
                
 Despite Eve’s eager and determined attitude toward separation from Adam in this scene, it can still be noted that her desire for solitude is as a temporary status.  Her suggestion to Adam that they work independently of one another is simply for one morning and she anticipates reuniting at noon (Milton, Book 9, 219).  Eve’s desire for solitude also seems to be self-focused.  Her self-focus is first seen in Book 4 (lines 449-471) as Eve sees a reflection of herself and seems content to gaze at her own beauty until she is distracted by “a Voice [which] warned” her (467).  Her self-focus is emphasized in this dialogue[2] as Eve expresses her determination to work with the rose bushes.  Contrastly[3], Eve does not express any care over Adam’s location or occupation for the morning.  She encourages Adam to go “where choice leads” him, and never asks him where he is going or what he will be doing (Milton, Book 9, 205f). 
                
Throughout their dialogue, “Adam manages to avoid admitting his unwillingness to let Eve work alone (and to be alone himself) by reminding Eve that Satan is on the loose” (Long, 8).  Perhaps Adam’s self-assurance is genuine and he truly feels that, by himself, he is strong enough to stand against the Fiend’s attack.  Or perhaps it his sense of obligation in protecting Eve which causes him to fear for her vulnerability without considering that he may be likewise susceptible. 



[1] Long explains this in describing that God has a different view of solitude and, once Adam grasps an understanding of different perspectives of solitude, God provides Adam with a reward: Eve.  Alternately, we can see that God clearly states that “it is not good for man to be alone” in the Biblical account of Genesis (although, at the end of creating every other thing God stated “it is good”).  While we should not confuse Milton’s depiction with the Genesis narration, the Genesis narration serves as a groundwork for Milton’s depiction and, therefore, we can see simply something that Milton expresses with detail and vividness.
[2] Book 9, 204-411
[3] This is a Deanna-ism meaning “in contrast”

4 comments:

  1. OK Deanna... I'm mostly "thinking out loud" here... and it's late-ish at night. So take everything I say in that light. ;-)

    My first thought is so tangential: Does it bug anyone else that Milton almost always refers to Eve in terms of beauty, as if she's beauty incarnate, but nothing else?

    Second... I'm not sure I quite agree with paragraph 3. I don't think the text allows for a reading where either Adam or Eve would have worked just as well. Satan is HOPING to find Eve alone (9.421-22); he doesn't think he'll be that fortunate, but she's definitely his first choice.

    Third... I like your observations about Adam and solitude. I hadn't really picked up on that before, but you're right.

    In general, I find myself completely dissatisfied with the character of Eve, and I feel like everything keeps coming back to that. I don't feel like there's enough to her to make Adam choose her over God -- except the visual. I don't WANT to make Adam out as that shallow... but I feel like Milton leaves me very little choice. (Complete side note: Adam's rant in Book 10 about the fall and the curse, etc. is a VERY interesting read.)

    Perhaps... and this is just a thought, and probably not all that helpful to your paper or topic right now... perhaps the reason Adam and Eve are so unsatisfactory as characters is that they never were intended to be in the spotlight. Perhaps we (mostly me...) have taken a Laertes or Horatio and made them the focal point instead of Hamlet, which naturally leaves us dissatisfied, because the play's not ABOUT them.

    This begs the question then: Who IS the protagonist in Milton's story? And once it's couched in those terms, the answer is fairly obviously Christ. Adam and Eve then become little more than a plot device -- the framework for Christ's amazing love and mercy to be displayed. Perhaps Eve doesn't always come across as amazingly consistent. So? She moves the plot where it needs to be moved. What if Adam's motives aren't always clear. Are the motives of the Three Weird Sisters in Macbeth ever fully explained? And does that hurt the plot? No. Besides, how often do REAL human beings (not characters in a story) have cut-and-dried motives, and how often are we consistent? So in that way, Adam and Eve more closely parallel real people than we'd like to admit.

    Wow. I feel like I really went way off topic. :-) I'm in Book 11 right now... hoping to finish it soon. Perhaps there will be some great revelation at the end that will make sense of all this. I'll be sure to let you know if there is... although I kind of think Miss Pothen would have mentioned something if there was. ;-)

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  2. Yes, I agree - Pothen would not leave us hanging without revealing some vital portion of Milton's writing. However, I'm not sure I buy that Christ is the protagonist. Granted, you've read much more of the text than I have (and I look forward to filling in the pieces during Christmas break!). But, in the portions which we have read for class, I do not see Christ as the central character.

    Christ is the central character from a Genesis perspective. This is undeniable. However, this is not presented by Milton. I would be much more apt to see Satan as the protagonist in Paradise Lost. We see him in hell; we see him on earth; we see him dialoguing with multiple characters: demons, angels, Eve... He is present in every scene, even if only by mention by another character.

    I'm very thankful you provided the reference for Satan looking for Eve, hoping to find her alone. I recalled this but could not find the passage. I have added it now - it was a piece I knew I was missing but thought perhaps I had read something into the text that wasn't there when I couldn't find it. That paragraph is revised :)

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  3. I thought about Satan as the protagonist, but the problem is... he kind of fizzles out after the Fall. Definitely, in the bits we read for class he is the character we hear the most about. But books 5 through 8 are about Satan's rebellion from God's perspective and the Creation -- much more about God (and Christ specifically) than Satan. Then, in Book 10, after the Fall Satan returns to Pandemonium and turns into a giant snake or dragon. I'm not really positive (I still have 2 books to read), but I don't think he has much of a part in the rest.

    Either way -- whether Christ is the protagonist or Satan -- it still leaves Adam and Eve as less significant. If Christ is the main character, Adam and Eve end up highlighting how much He is willing to do for such unworthy ones. If Satan is the main character, we see the depths of his corruption through the fact that he can't leave anything alone until he has made it as corrupt as himself. The lengths to which Satan will go to corrupt mankind show how thoroughly self-deceived he really was. As we've discussed in class (and as Lewis points out), Satan built such an alternate reality for himself that he really is insane.

    Eve, it seems, is also very willing to be deluded in a similar way. (The Narcissus-esque bit at her creation described in the same language as Satan's self-absorption indicates this fairly clearly.) And for whatever reason this is (whether the CHARACTER has these traits regardless of gender, or whether Milton is saying that ALL WOMEN are this way -- which I'm not sure you can do, even though it's VERY tempting) I think Satan hones in on that; so he goes after Eve.

    Adam doesn't seem to be prey to this particular fault. As you pointed out, he doesn't really like being by himself. He will do ANYTHING, including eat the forbidden fruit blatantly, to stay with Eve. This is definitely vulnerability -- a weak spot in his armor -- but of a different kind than Eve's.

    Which takes us right back to why Adam chose Eve over God. Story-wise, he had to. If she was to be his Kryptonite, and his need for her his downfall, he HAD to feel that God wasn't enough before Eve's creation. If Adam can be happy with God before Eve... then he could (more easily... possibly not completely) withstand temptation, and we there goes our plot.

    Hmmm... interesting things to think about. I find it tough to get away from ADAM and EVE being ALL MEN and ALL WOMEN... but I think we have to to do justice to the work. I also tend to stop thinking of it in STORY terms... which then confuses me more. But if you think about Milton writing it and having to get his characters from A to B to Z finally, some things make more sense. Thanks for letting me interact with this. I really should have been writing papers for that class... or at least speaking up more IN class....

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  4. I am posting the rest of my paper... feel free to continue to interact ;)

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